In my ten thousandth puff of lights

>> 6.5.10

Every night will be moonless.
There will be no more dustily sparks to ever twinkle again
My cups of coffee will be cold, and i
Will forever blame teranum’s chillness that stirs my every corner.

My sole will walk the grainy sand, and i
will be saved by the smokes from my parched lips
that will somehow keep the solitude warm.

And, i
Will forever thank the rain
for easing the fire beneath
the waters in my eyes

Soon, longing will fade
Yes, soon.
As the last teardrops of summer falls.

Freefall's note:
Natagpuan ko sa mga lumang gamit na itatapon ko na sana, nakasulat sa gamit ng table napkin at nakaipit sa pagitan ng mga lumang pahina ng aking college notebook. Ilang taon na ba ang lumipas? Tatlo. Mrahil apat. Kung saan o kailan o kung bakit ko sinulat, hindi ko na alam. Marahil pampalipas oras. Marahil para sa ngayon at sa darating na tag-ulan. Marahil para sa’yo. Paalam. Pinilit ko ang ulan kaya’t wag ka ng mag-abalang ito’y pigilan pa.


aiza Saturday, May 08, 2010 9:07:00 AM  

kung hindi lang matagal mo nang ikinukwento sa akin ang huling linya ng tulang ito, convinced na talaga akong something inside you is happening. pero hidi, hindi pa rin ako naniniwalang your notes are intended solely to pique your readers curiosity. sorry. hindi lamang para sa mga magsasaka ang ulan, alam ko. matagal pa ang tunay na tag-ulan. ilang pagpipilit pa. at hanggang kelan siya magsasayaw ng sun dance? Haha!

by the way, I so love this post. Isa akong fan. ;)

freefall Monday, May 10, 2010 7:49:00 PM  

thank you for being a fan, aiza.
and so you said it, that's the main purpose: TO KEEP YOU, and the rest of the world, CURIOUS. haha. (sense the cruella deville laugh?)


pipigilan ko ang ulan,  Friday, May 28, 2010 1:23:00 AM  

Dahil minahal mo ako
Lahat ay gagawin para sayo
Huhulihin ko ang buwan
Pipigilin ang ulan...
Dahil minahal mo ako
Isisigaw ko sa buong mundo
Laging iingatan ang pag-ibig mo...
Dahil minahal mo ako...

Anonymous,  Tuesday, December 07, 2010 12:38:00 PM  

Good point, though sometimes it's hard to arrive to definite conclusions

Anonymous,  Friday, December 10, 2010 1:39:00 AM  

GLADIOLA is an epitome of a hopeless romantic. Eventhough you are a member of SMP and ASSUMING club, you are still the QUEEN, our highness...

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